Thalmann Retirement Service Rubric

Richard, I think YOU needs to be left, as the client isn’t who did the report.  What do you think?

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Tells where the client should move, why they should move there and how you decided this.

 

 

Includes the date, greeting and closing in correct places.

 

 

Includes correct spelling, punctuation and capitalization.

 

 

 

 

Tells the client where they should move.  Why they should move there and how you decided this are not clear.

 

Includes the date, greeting and closing, but not all are in the correct places.

 

There are a few spelling mistakes and punctuation errors.

Does NOT explain why the client should move or how you decided this.

 

 

 

Does not have a date or closing.

 

 

 

 

There are many spelling errors and punctuation mistakes.