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Introduction Methods (Example Topic:
Housing for the Poor) underlined portions of the text are
clarifications of the thesis |
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Opening with a Story (Anecdote) A
good way of catching your reader's attention is by sharing a story that sets
up your paper. Sharing a story gives a paper a more personal feel and helps
make your reader comfortable. |
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As Arlene Mathews drove up to the
inner city construction site, she wondered what she’d gotten herself into.
She saw homes in need of a paint jobs, lawns that needing cutting, and kids
who seemed to live in the street. They must not have air conditioning,
Matthews thought. When she got out of the car, one of her six colleagues
who’d agreed to help on this service project,
greeted her with a hammer and a construction apron. She knew that after
today, she’d feel the sense of accomplishing for she was about to build a
home for the less fortunate. |
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Specific Detail Opening (similar to story) Giving
specific details about your subject appeals to your reader's curiosity and
helps establish a visual picture
of what your paper is about. |
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Electric drill. Screw driver. Hammer and nails.
Sheet rock and shingles. Cement for a sidewalk, wood for a porch. Volunteers.
Teamwork. A sense of satisfaction. Hundreds of people each year give of
themselves to an organization called Habitat for Humanity, a nonprofit,
non-denominational organization who constructs houses for the
underprivileged. |
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Open with a Quotation |
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”Homelessness
and poverty are inextricably linked,” stated former President Jimmy Carter in
his speech at the Habitat for Humanity’s annual fund drive dinner in |
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Open with an Interesting Statistic Statistics
that grab the reader help to make an effective introduction. |
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After
the mass layoffs in the aircraft industry in |
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Question Opening Possibly the easiest
opening is one that presents one or more questions to be answered in the
paper. This is effective because questions are usually what the reader has in
mind when he or she sees your topic. |
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Do
people who live in cardboard boxes have any hope beyond a Salvation Army cot,
city sewers, bridges, and overpasses? Does one have to go through a period of
unemployment to empathize with this growing part of our society? Or is
there an organization nearby that promotes the gathering of volunteers to
provide simple, affordable housing to the homeless? Yes, there is, Habitat
for Humanity. |
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Thesis Statement Opening This
is the traditional style of opening a paper. This is a
"mini-summary" of your paper. |
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For example: |
Habitat for Humanity is a nonprofit, nondenominational Christian housing
organization that builds simple, decent, and affordable housing. Volunteers
of all ages all across the country join together to build a house in day. |
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